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Star-crossed

A haiku

By J. R. LowePublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Star-crossed
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And we were dancing,

like two stars in sapphire skies;

aglow amidst voids.

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J. R. Lowe

By day, I'm a PhD student, by night.... I'm still a PhD student, but sometimes I procrastinate by writing on Vocal. Based in Australia.

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  • Rather Zainabout a year ago

    aglow amidst voids ahh I love it.

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    Oooooo this is gooood. Two stars amidst voids ... what a fab metaphor.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Wonderful!!!

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