And we were dancing,
like two stars in sapphire skies;
aglow amidst voids.
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J. R. Lowe
By day, I'm a PhD student, by night.... I'm still a PhD student, but sometimes I procrastinate by writing on Vocal. Based in Brisbane, Australia.
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aglow amidst voids ahh I love it.
Oooooo this is gooood. Two stars amidst voids ... what a fab metaphor.
Wonderful!!!