Sins' Balm
A poem about overcoming fear, and even finding joy, in the familiar unknown by ED 6/14/22
The nightmare I avoided while awake
Turned into a sweet dream
The sins I hid, fearing what’s at stake
Are my hopeful future, it seems
Enough of reality seeped into my mind
While I laid down to rest
Hum-drum monotony of that kind
Turns out, for me, is best
A little laughter here and there
Enlightened the caution I felt
I was eager to start, which is fair
With the long-drawn cards I was dealt
He wasn’t so keen, tired after a long day
At work at the wedding party
But I was ready to make him my meal, in the best way
His whole being a feast quite hearty
He rolled his blind eyes, and flopped around
I made the best of the situation
I was free to fly, totally unbound
From the fear of procreation
A little lackluster, surprisingly normal
No magic or passion or jazz
The event was quite casual, not nearly as formal
As I expected and thought required pizazz
But what a mess came of the activity
I laughed it off with ease
He cleaned us up, showing his proclivity
To shoulder our burdens and to please
A final hug as the pirates arrived
I treasured the moment with calm
I look forward now to the experience I survived
This dream is my sins’ balm.
About the Creator
Emily Dickerson
Hopeful and young, full of love. From my heart high praises are sung. For this reason I am here: to love and serve and bring all souls near. <3
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I love this 'sins' balm'. Masterful work!