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Sinner or Saint?

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By Irene MielkePublished 11 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Sinner or Saint?
Photo by SaiKrishna Saketh Yellapragada on Unsplash

Sinner inside myself is what I see.

Self-reflection, mirror in the water, provoking me.

Seeing, Seeing, these demons taking over me.

Salvation, I cry out, oh creator, stay close to me!

Sunset, purple, pink, and clear skies of blue.

Seeing the horizon, I watch this couple on their canoe.

Starring in the distance, I feel the wind on my face.

Space between me and you; these memories I erase.

Solitude - I'm in my devastation.

Sun goes down - I need restoration.

Skies so clear - I can hear the bird's tune.

Stars now - I see you above beside the moon.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Irene Mielke


I am Irene. I am an aspiring blogger and writer looking to influence the next generation towards their dreams. I want the rest to know that age is just a #, and you're never too old to begin a new dream from scratch.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    Nice! Very good work!

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