Simp-pathetic?
A poem about loving someone too much
I love you like you are my light and my life
wanted you to be my wife
loved you like a fetish
black like a rubber skirt
the words you say hurt
you cut my heart to ribbons
and still I am giving
my all
in your dominance I fall
I hit the wall
but I drill through
I love you I still do
but I am ruled by you
the wisest thing to do is to walk away
but I can’t eat or breathe without you
I love you I know I am no wimp
maybe I am a simp
but I love you all the same
in our deranged game.
About the Creator
Daniel Hooks
A poet, activist and story teller who currently battles with a severe mental health problem.
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This was so relatable! Sometimes, we just can't help it. Very beautifully written!