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Sickening

A serious topic

By Dana StewartPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Sickening
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Old man yesterday had a choice

Buy medicine or food without a voice

Cure the ills or make a meal

Picking only one is an ordeal

If you don’t have to choose, rejoice!

heartbreak
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  • Babs Iverson4 months ago

    Pulls at the heartstrings!!! Reminded me of a true story. They only could afford the pain medicine and not the antibiotics that would have saved them. Heartbreaking!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Great limerick on an unfortunately too real social issue. Very well done.

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  • Harmony Kentabout a year ago

    All too common a choice these days. It’s as though we’ve gone back in time. You captured this perfectly. Well done! 💕🙂

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    This is a wonderful limerick that highlights the difficult choices faced by those in need, and reminds us to be grateful for the abundance in our own lives.👌💗💗💗

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    So sad this is a reality for so many 😢 Well done!

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Too many people are forced to make this choice. Thank you for sharing this 🙏

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