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A serious topic

By Dana StewartPublished 7 days ago 1 min read
Photo by Adam Birkett on Unsplash

Old man yesterday had a choice

Buy medicine or food without a voice

Cure the ills or make a meal

Picking only one is an ordeal

If you don’t have to choose, rejoice!


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Dana Stewart

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  • Cathy holmes7 days ago

    Great limerick on an unfortunately too real social issue. Very well done.

  • Harmony Kent7 days ago

    All too common a choice these days. It’s as though we’ve gone back in time. You captured this perfectly. Well done! 💕🙂

  • Quincy.v7 days ago

    This is a wonderful limerick that highlights the difficult choices faced by those in need, and reminds us to be grateful for the abundance in our own lives.👌💗💗💗

  • C. H. Richard7 days ago

    So sad this is a reality for so many 😢 Well done!

  • Loryne Andawey7 days ago

    Too many people are forced to make this choice. Thank you for sharing this 🙏

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