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Shine On

A blessing

By Julie LacksonenPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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Shine On
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May you shine with the glow of a bright, golden sun.

May your laughter reveal an abundance of fun.

May your life be filled with great music and joy,

And may you experience very few things that annoy.

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May you have many friends who are loyal and true.

May you make a fair living doing what you love to do.

May you find good wisdom in what you choose to know,

And may you spread humor and happiness wherever you go.

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May your best love stand by you in lean times and wealth,

May you endure very little pain, but rather, good health.

May your living be worth more than the money you spend,

And may you find peace as your life nears the end.

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About the Creator

Julie Lacksonen

Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)about a year ago

    Great Blessings and We’ll wishes 😊 Thanks For the Positive Affirmations ❤️❤️

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