Scenic Overlook

A Mountain Haiku

By Rachel DeePublished about a year ago • 1 min read

"Marry me?" you asked.

I can't breathe, the altitude.

Just give me the view.

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Rachel Dee

I'm a nice, normal mom in a nice, normal town. I believe in magic, miracles, good triumphing over evil and the overall effectiveness of laughter, chocolate, and a good, reliable sword. I also teach Special Education. That's it's own magic.

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