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Rise, Again

Wonderful undulation

By Sonia Heidi UnruhPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Rise, Again
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Empires. Breaking waves.

Arcing moon. Your tiny chest.

Rise ... And fall ... And rise ...

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About the Creator

Sonia Heidi Unruh

I love: my husband and children; all who claim me as family or friend; the first bite of chocolate; the last blue before sunset; solving puzzles; stroking cats; finding myself by writing; losing myself in reading; the Creator who is love.

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  • Novel Allenabout a month ago

    Comparison between an empire, waves, moon and a tiny chest rising and falling. Great analogy...smart mix and blend. Congrats.

  • Rowan Finley 2 months ago

    Nice job! 👍

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Simply beautiful.

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!!

  • This was so powerful. I was disappointed at the end because I craved more.

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    You have written so many beautiful stories your story is admirable please visit my vocal id and read a story please

  • kristiono2 months ago

    good

  • JBaz2 months ago

    This is beautiful

  • Kristen Balyeat2 months ago

    This is gorgeous!✨💕

  • D.K. Shepard2 months ago

    Stunning! Well done!

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Incredibly beautiful 🤩

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    😭❤️. So gorgeous.

  • Rachel Deeming2 months ago

    There's like eternity here but also fragility. I think it's empires that makes me feel like it could all come crashing down. Not the waves or the moon.

  • Caroline Jane2 months ago

    Gorgeous. Quite the diamond, shaped and cut beautifully. ❤️

  • olymoolla2 months ago

    You have written very beautifully, your writings are admirable, I invite you to visit my vocal id

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    This is wonderful, so huge, and so tiny without being any less huge.

  • Nice words

  • Jill Harper-Judd2 months ago

    beautiful!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    ❣️Congrats!!

  • A. Lenae2 months ago

    Yes. You depict heaven and the fragility of earthly mortality all in one very intentional and poignant piece. Beautiful.

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 months ago

    Really, really lovely 💙

  • Kageno Hoshino2 months ago

    Simple life

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Simply beautiful. Congrats on the TS

  • Daphsam2 months ago

    Beautiful description of life. 

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