Repeat
A Poem by Keila Aartila
(This poem is dedicated to my husband in celebration of our 16th anniversary.)
I want
to fall in love
again with you, just you;
spin me, rewind our common dream;
dizzy
~~~
dizzy -
lost in your blue
sea, tumbling under waves,
splashed by refreshing clarity;
feeling
~~~
feeling
unstoppable
under the spell of you -
confident, capable, I shine
golden
~~~
golden
sunshine rises,
reflected in your eyes
showing me possibilities
for us
~~~
for us -
infinite light,
pure and bold forever;
in this space, only you are what
I want.
I want to thank Mike Singleton (here’s his profile) again for bringing this poetic form to my attention, and propagating a new addiction!
Thanks for reading, and share this if you like!
About the Creator
KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
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Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Heartfelt and relatable
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Comments (3)
Loved it first time, love it now
Beautiful, inspiring love poem. I love the descriptions.
Loving it!!!💖💕 What is the poem format called?