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Red Eye Rising

The A.M. Adventure

By Amber AnnabellePublished 10 months ago 1 min read
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Red Eye Rising
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There once was a girl from Surrey,

Whose work schedule was often quite blurry.

She had an early flight,

Which gave her quite a fright,

And made her feel very hurried.

*

She longed to be back in her bed,

To rest her weary and sleepy head.

But she knew she must go,

And put on quite a show,

To get through the day ahead.

*

So she boarded the plane with a sigh,

And closed her eyes, though she wanted to cry.

She reminded herself of the pay,

And how it helped her get through the day,

And decided to give it her best try.

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Amber Annabelle

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  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    oh you never cease to amaze me! turn mundane into something special! well done with this, Amber!

  • Omer Piroabout a year ago

    Liked it Amber, very nice.

  • Liked it :)

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Very nice.

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