Poem 1
from my collection, The Flaw in my Plan
Poem 1:
And I could tell you the story
of my many near-sighted pursuits.
But I also stood and moved and danced
and tottered home drunkenly on especially dark nights.
And you would nod and smile politely
and say, “Such a rich existence,” placatingly.
It was me, running from things that could not exist without me.
Battered copies of my guts spilled,
read only by myself, repeatedly.
There was never a moment alone, while I was with myself.
No glass of wine could drown me,
no painted canvas could smother me.
And I could tell you the story
Of long nights in the barley.
But I could also tell you of surfaces polished to a glow.
And courses prepared by these hands; served on porcelain.
And you would frown and nod thoughtfully
and say, “So fine, so rich, so lonely,” despairingly.
It was me macheting a pathway to the hollow
where the ground and the water and the flowers and the trees
could never be owned, but were mine all the same.
There was never a moment alone, while I was with myself.
And no mindless doing could abbreviate me,
no strenuous labor could burn me down.
And I could tell you the story
of bleeding hands down to the bone.
But I also broke and swayed and gasped
and depleted my body on especially dark nights.
And you would run and yell back frightenedly
and say, “Such a terrible waste,” franticly.
It was me dropping my sword in the face of my opponents
because the forest around us was set ablaze
and they trampled me on their way to safety, beating me, regardless.
There was never a moment alone, while I was with myself.
No stark, barren nothingness could faze me
no hereafter could call me home.
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