Please Ask Before You Touch
For I am not a doll
You tell me that you like me,
You say you love my smile,
You say you love my hair,
And my beautiful style.
You say that my skin is like warm velvet,
It melts you when you touch it;
You enjoy our intimacy,
That's no reason to disrespect me.
You say that I'm alluring,
And my eyes are captivating,
You really love my shape,
You find me too tempting.
I love you, and I love that you love me,
But please respect my dignity,
For I have feelings, you see.
I don't ask for very much,
You are my everything and all;
But please ask before you touch,
For I am not a doll.
About the Creator
Carol Townend
Fiction, Horror, Sex, Love, Mental Health, Children's fiction and more. You'll find many stories in my profile. I don't believe in sticking with one Niche! I write, but I also read a lot too.
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Comments (2)
Yes! This! Wonderful poem, Carol. 💓 Thank you for writing and sharing!
You’re not a doll. You’re an amazingly talented artist. 👏🏼