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Passing By

A Haiku

By L. StormerPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Time Capsule Haiku Challenge
Passing By
Photo by Noah Silliman on Unsplash

Moments dripping like morphine,

fill years gone in blinks.

Too much is never enough.

sad poetry

About the Creator

L. Stormer

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  • Ben Lam12 days ago

    I liked this one alot. Very out of the box thinking to do 7-5-7 instead of the 5-7-5

  • Robbie Cheadle13 days ago

    I like this very much. Congratulations on your placing.

  • Loryne Andawey13 days ago

    Congratulations on placing in this challenge!

  • Dane BH13 days ago

    This is really lovely. It also doesn't seem to adhere to the rules of the haiku challenge. The syllable pattern in this poem is 7-5-7, not 5-7-5.

  • Caroline Jane13 days ago

    Brave and poignant. Well done and congratulations.

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a month ago

    Lovely inverted haiku 🤗

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    Great job. Very relatable. Hearted and subscribe. Look forward to reading more of your stories 👌♥️

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