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On the Impact of Birth Trauma

- and the unexpected way it lingers

By Donna ReneePublished 6 months ago 1 min read

To this day, when I

say goodnight, I whisper too,

"Goodbye." Just in case.

sad poetry

About the Creator

Donna Renee

Hi! Thanks for reading! My hobbies include making coffee, drinking coffee, and starting to write a story and then rage-deleting it when I get the slightest bit frustrated.


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  • Roy Stevens2 months ago


  • Donna Fox3 months ago

    I'm so sorry for your loss, so heart breaking!

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Oh my. So much said in so few words. Excellent.

  • Mariann Carroll3 months ago

    That’s is very sad , poem. It’s heartbreaking 😢

  • Quincy.V3 months ago


  • Gina C.4 months ago

    Oh my, this is so beautifully done, and the caution in this nearly brought me to my knees. Really, really great work. 😍

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