
i live in the city but my heart is in the bush
this wide vast and brown land is so me
the story may be mild, and not exactly wild
but i love where i am and what i see
i get out there as often as is possible
bare minimum i try for every fourteen days
quick rat run out of this rat race city
in one of so many different ways
the things i have witnessed
the many places that i’ve been
the majesty the beauty
the things i’ve done, the sights i’ve seen
i’ve had the sun in my eyes and ice in my beard
i’ve had blisters from the walking i’ve done
i had a vision in my heart and steel in my step
as i followed this vagabond sun
i have at times woken, out there in the open
as another majestic dawn races an ever early sky
from lofty ledges and many mountains
close your eyes, open your arms and fly
i have seen the sun rise over a winter desert
so cold, so sharp harsh and still
i have seen the fog roll into vine laden valleys
both from within it and up on the hill
from far horizons i have tried to touch the stars
i’ve chased nights until they became the day
i have seen soft waves lap a mile long beach
i couldn’t possibly want it any other way
nearly every single day something new is presented
i feel organically and naturally blessed
i truly do love my sunburnt country
but i reckon you’d already guessed
About the Creator
Brenton F
How much is not not enough and how little is too much?
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Comments (6)
Related to this in every way (minus the "ice in my beard" bit). Beautifully done, Brenton! (also, LOVE "followed this vagabond sun" Way too good!)
“I live in the city but my heart is in a bush.” Wow. Never related so much before 💕👏🏼👏🏼
Bloody oath.
Brilliant use of imageries. Very beautifully written. I loved it!
I love "vagabond sun" 😁
This was beautifully conveyed!