Ode to all the Comments Left on my Poems:
Narrative Poem
The poem is living
inside of me, like a ribbon
Swirling around,
inside my head like a flag pole,
The sight of her gives my heart flutter-stutters
Wonderful, kind-
So, clever!
She is not the poet,
SHE is the poem
I like,
the zingers you end poems with...
You’re a genius
Women are magical creatures
Provide her with house,
she will make it a home
Love her, and she will give you children..
I always thought,
poetry belongs to the past
Sorry,
I was wrong!
Even in words,
its visually captivating...
I can feel your words,
and hear your soul!
I love the pace,
I felt the soul...
I feel,
you’re talking
about the love you deserve,
This is absolutely beautiful!
From your beautiful lips,
I write poems,
with the ink of your lips!
Wow,
What a way to compliment someone!
My dear writing friend of mine—
Beautifully said,
Uh-mazing!
About the Creator
Saroyan Coles
I want to empower others with my writing. I have always dreamed of seeing my name, on something.
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