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Ode to all the Comments Left on my Poems:

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Ode to all the Comments Left on my Poems:
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The poem is living

inside of me, like a ribbon

Swirling around,

inside my head like a flag pole,

The sight of her gives my heart flutter-stutters

Wonderful, kind-

So, clever!

She is not the poet,

SHE is the poem

I like,

the zingers you end poems with...

You’re a genius

Women are magical creatures

Provide her with house,

she will make it a home

Love her, and she will give you children..

I always thought,

poetry belongs to the past


I was wrong!

Even in words,

its visually captivating...

I can feel your words,

and hear your soul!

I love the pace,

I felt the soul...

I feel,

you’re talking

about the love you deserve,

This is absolutely beautiful!

From your beautiful lips,

I write poems,

with the ink of your lips!


What a way to compliment someone!

My dear writing friend of mine—

Beautifully said,


love poems
Saroyan Coles
Saroyan Coles
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I want to empower others with my writing. I have always dreamed of seeing my name, on something.

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