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๐ถ๐๐ฒ ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ป ๐ต๐๐๐๐น๐ถ๐ป ๐๐ถ๐ป๐ฐ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ต๐ฌ๐. ๐ป๐ผ ๐บ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐ผ ๐บ๐ ๐ฐ๐ผ๐บ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐.
๐ถ๐บ ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฝ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ถ๐๐ฒ๐ -๐๐ผ๐ผ ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ป๐๐ฒ ๐๐ผ ๐ณ๐ถ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฎ๐ด๐ฒ. -๐๐ผ๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฟ๐ผ๐ธ๐ฒ๐ป ๐๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฒ ๐ด๐น๐๐ฒ๐ฑ. -๐๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฟ๐ผ๐๐ป ๐๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฒ ๐ด๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ป.
๐ถ๐บ ๐ฎ๐ป ๐ถ๐ฑ๐ผ๐ถ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ผ๐ป ๐๐ฎ๐ถ๐๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐ถ๐ฒ๐ป๐๐น๐ ๐ถ๐ป ๐บ๐ ๐ฑ๐ฟ๐ผ๐ผ๐น.
๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐ถ๐๐ป๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ฑ๐ป๐ฒ๐๐ ๐ถ๐ป ๐บ๐ ๐๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฎ๐ด๐ฒ. ๐๐ผ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ฟ๐ถ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ผ๐ป ๐๐ผ๐๐ฟ ๐ผ๐๐ป.
๐ถ๐น๐น ๐๐ฒ๐น๐น ๐๐ผ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐๐ฎ๐บ๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ ๐ถ๐๐ฒ ๐๐ผ๐น๐ฑ ๐บ๐๐๐ฒ๐น๐ณ.
๐บ๐ ๐น๐ถ๐ฒ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ป๐ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ ๐บ๐๐๐๐ฒ๐ฟ๐, ๐ท๐๐๐ ๐ฎ ๐๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ผ๐ป๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ ๐บ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐๐ฒ๐ฎ๐น๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐๐ถ๐๐ต ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐๐๐ฒ๐ฒ๐๐ฒ๐๐ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐ธ๐ถ๐๐๐ฒ๐.
๐ผ๐ป๐ฐ๐ฒ ๐๐ฝ๐ผ๐ป ๐ฎ ๐๐ถ๐บ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ฎ ๐ท๐๐ป๐ธ๐ถ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ผ ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐ถ๐ป๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ถ๐ป ๐ฝ๐๐ฑ๐ฑ๐น๐ฒ๐ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐ฝ๐ถ๐๐. ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐น๐ถ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ถ๐ป ๐ฎ ๐ณ๐ฎ๐ฐ๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป ๐ผ๐ณ ๐ณ๐ถ๐ฐ๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ธ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ธ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐๐ผ๐ผ๐ธ. ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ป๐ฒ๐๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฎ ๐บ๐ผ๐บ๐ฒ๐ป๐ ๐ฎ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ณ๐ฟ๐ผ๐บ ๐๐ผ๐ฑ ๐ฏ๐๐ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ถ๐๐ณ๐๐น ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐บ๐ฒ๐ป๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฎ๐ฝ๐ฝ๐ฒ๐ฎ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฐ๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐ ๐ผ๐ป๐ฒ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐๐ถ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ฒ๐ฑ.
๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฎ๐พ๐๐ถ๐ฟ๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ผ๐ณ๐ณ๐น๐ผ๐ฎ๐ฑ๐ถ๐ป๐ด ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐บ๐ฒ ๐๐ผ๐ผ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฎ ๐ฏ๐๐ฟ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ป ๐๐ผ ๐ผ๐ป๐ฒ ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐, ๐๐ต๐ถ๐น๐ฒ ๐๐ฎ๐น๐ธ๐ถ๐ป๐ด, ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฒ๐ป๐๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ฎ ๐ฟ๐ผ๐ผ๐บ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ต๐ถ๐๐ฒ ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐ถ๐ป๐. ๐ณ๐ฎ๐ฟ ๐ฎ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ณ๐ฟ๐ผ๐บ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐ถ๐ ๐ฏ๐๐ ๐ฐ๐น๐ผ๐๐ฒ ๐ฒ๐ป๐ผ๐๐ด๐ต ๐๐ผ ๐๐บ๐ฒ๐น๐น ๐ถ๐๐ ๐๐๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ ๐๐๐ฒ๐ป๐ฐ๐ต.
๐ถ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฏ๐ฎ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฑ, ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฏ๐น๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ฎ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฏ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฟ๐ผ๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ณ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ถ๐ด๐ป ๐ฝ๐ฟ๐ผ๐บ๐ถ๐๐ฒ๐ ๐น๐ผ๐ป๐ด ๐ฒ๐ป๐ผ๐๐ด๐ต ๐๐ผ ๐ผ๐๐ป ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ถ๐ฟ ๐ผ๐ณ๐ณ๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ถ๐ป๐ด๐.
๐ถ๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ ๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ ๐ต๐ฒ๐ฟ ๐ฐ๐ผ๐บ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฎ๐บ๐ฒ ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฝ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ต๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ผ๐ป๐๐ถ๐ป๐๐๐บ ๐ผ๐ณ ๐น๐ถ๐ณ๐ฒ ๐๐ป๐ฎ๐น๐๐ฒ๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฑ.
๐ป๐ผ๐ ๐ฎ ๐บ๐ผ๐บ๐ฒ๐ป๐ ๐ฎ๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ณ๐ฟ๐ผ๐บ ๐๐ผ๐ฑ. ๐ป๐ผ๐ ๐ฐ๐ฒ๐บ๐ฒ๐ป๐๐ฒ๐ฑ ๐ถ๐ป ๐๐๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ผ๐น๐ฎ๐ฐ๐ฒ.
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This was raw and poignant! Very beautifully written! Congratulations on your Top Story! I've subscribed to you!
This is amazing!!
This is really really good. Iโm obsessed.
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So raw and honest; I admire your style. Well done and congrats on Top Story! ๐
It's as if you put a hand to the screen, and the lines of your palm formed magic, swirling, mesmerizing words. What a gorgeous poem. This is to be eaten up by the spoonful.
Raw, compelling, evocative. This is brilliant, Jenny!
Another brilliant piece - very well done!
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๐ถ๐บ ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฝ๐ผ๐ฟ๐ฎ๐๐ถ๐ผ๐ป ๐ผ๐ณ ๐๐ต๐ฒ๐ถ๐๐ฒ๐ -๐๐ผ๐ผ ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ป๐๐ฒ ๐๐ผ ๐ณ๐ถ๐ป๐ฑ ๐ฝ๐ฎ๐๐๐ฎ๐ด๐ฒ. -๐๐ผ๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฟ๐ผ๐ธ๐ฒ๐ป ๐๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฒ ๐ด๐น๐๐ฒ๐ฑ. -๐๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฟ๐ผ๐๐ป ๐๐ผ ๐ฏ๐ฒ ๐ด๐ฟ๐ฒ๐ฒ๐ป. Oof...Great words. Congratulations!
This is so well done. I love that you hold nothing back and attack the page. You just got a new subscriber.
Congratulations on Top Story!!
Oh and back again to say Congrats on Top Story!
Damn, I love how honest this is. Bravo to you, Jenny!
Wow! I really enjoyed this, Jenny. So raw and unapologetic.
A wonderfully honest piece. I appreciate the simplicity of the form. Well done :)
This is excellent, Jenny. Keep it up.