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There once was a girl from the lower east side,
She sold her sweet melons by the sunny seaside,
A young man came browsing,
His 'spirits' were rousing,
Grabbed her ripe wares and left with more than hurt pride.
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Comments (17)
lol another great one, love it!
Satisfied on how it end 👍👍Well done 😍
I kind of wing it coming. And I'm glad he got what he deserved. Great limerick.
Good one. Good poetic flow.
Omg! Love the subtlety in this and that the diction is very nursery rhyme-y but it’s deceptively raunchy haha, perfectttt.
Love it!
Hahaha
HAHAHA! brilliant! he had that coming! so clever and potentially a Top Story!
This was awesome! He got what he deserved! Also, “spitits”… you are so creative ! 😅😍
Ooooo, this was soooo good! Freaking fantastic!
That is AWESOME! Gave me great laugh. Thank you.
Yeah she did! Good one!
Oooo, vicious. I like it! 🤣 Awesome job!
lol. This is fabulous, Nerd.
Melon grabbing at the farmer's market is how You check for quality produce. Melon grabbing on the subway, bus stop, or anywhere else for that matter will get You slapped and thrown in a number in a cell instead of a cell's number.
Haha! Love this one!
Oh snap!!!