Poets logo

Newborn Baby

Our hearts are literally connected to the universe. Haiku: 4 elements

By PK ColleranPublished 18 days ago โ€ข 1 min read
9
Newborn Baby
Photo by NASA on Unsplash

Ferrous minerals

Fused in a supernova

Fuel our baby's heart

love poemsnature poetry
9

About the Creator

PK Colleran

Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.

Enjoyed working with a friend as editor of his bilingual poetry, published in 2022 by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul on Amazon.

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  3. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

Add your insights

Comments (10)

Sign in to comment
  • Maureen Colleran Battey11 days ago

    I came back to re-read this one. Itโ€™s so touching. Beautiful.

  • Gina B.18 days ago

    I had to look up ferrous. Excellent!

  • Cathy holmes18 days ago

    Oooh. Very nicely done.

  • sleepy drafts18 days ago

    This is so gorgeous. โค๏ธ

  • Colt Henderson18 days ago

    Loved the picture and the imagery!

  • Colt Henderson18 days ago

    Loved the picture and the imagery!

  • Gina C.18 days ago

    Oh, I really love how you did this ๐Ÿ˜ I adore the connection between a babyโ€™s heart and the beautiful, vast universe full of nebula! Super well done!

  • Beautiful and thought provoking.

  • Babs Iverson18 days ago

    Lovely!!! Left some love ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜Š

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

ยฉ 2023 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.