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Newborn Baby

Our hearts are literally connected to the universe. Haiku: 4 elements

By PK ColleranPublished 18 days ago โ€ข 1 min read
Newborn Baby
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Ferrous minerals

Fused in a supernova

Fuel our baby's heart

love poemsnature poetry

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PK Colleran

Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.

Enjoyed working with a friend as editor of his bilingual poetry, published in 2022 by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul on Amazon.

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  • Maureen Colleran Battey11 days ago

    I came back to re-read this one. Itโ€™s so touching. Beautiful.

  • Gina B.18 days ago

    I had to look up ferrous. Excellent!

  • Cathy holmes18 days ago

    Oooh. Very nicely done.

  • sleepy drafts18 days ago

    This is so gorgeous. โค๏ธ

  • Colt Henderson18 days ago

    Loved the picture and the imagery!

  • Colt Henderson18 days ago

    Loved the picture and the imagery!

  • Gina C.18 days ago

    Oh, I really love how you did this ๐Ÿ˜ I adore the connection between a babyโ€™s heart and the beautiful, vast universe full of nebula! Super well done!

  • Beautiful and thought provoking.

  • Babs Iverson18 days ago

    Lovely!!! Left some love ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ˜Š

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