Newborn Baby
Our hearts are literally connected to the universe. Haiku: 4 elements
By PK ColleranPublished 18 days ago • 1 min read
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Ferrous minerals
Fused in a supernova
Fuel our baby's heart
About the Creator
PK Colleran
Longtime teacher, now trying my hand at writing. Poetry, essays and even experimenting with fiction.
Enjoyed working with a friend as editor of his bilingual poetry, published in 2022 by Cafh Foundation: Landscape of the Soul on Amazon.
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Comments (10)
I came back to re-read this one. It’s so touching. Beautiful.
I had to look up ferrous. Excellent!
Oooh. Very nicely done.
This is so gorgeous. ❤️
Loved the picture and the imagery!
Loved the picture and the imagery!
Oh, I really love how you did this 😍 I adore the connection between a baby’s heart and the beautiful, vast universe full of nebula! Super well done!
Beautiful and thought provoking.
Very nice 😀
Lovely!!! Left some love 💕💖😊