Newborn Baby
Our hearts are literally connected to the universe. Haiku: 4 elements
By PK ColleranPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
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Ferrous minerals
Fused in a supernova
Fuel our baby's heart
About the Creator
PK Colleran
I love words and their power to enrich our lives.
Editor of bilingual poetry collection Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez, published by Cafh Foundation.
Translator of Living Consciously and Words Matter, by Jorge Waxemberg.
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Whoa! That was so cool. It really is fascinating how connected we are and what we share with the world/universe.
I came back to re-read this one. It’s so touching. Beautiful.
I had to look up ferrous. Excellent!
Oooh. Very nicely done.
This is so gorgeous. ❤️
Loved the picture and the imagery!
Loved the picture and the imagery!
Oh, I really love how you did this 😍 I adore the connection between a baby’s heart and the beautiful, vast universe full of nebula! Super well done!
Beautiful and thought provoking.
Very nice 😀
Lovely!!! Left some love 💕💖😊