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Our hearts are literally connected to the universe. Haiku: 4 elements

By PK ColleranPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Newborn Baby
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Ferrous minerals

Fused in a supernova

Fuel our baby's heart

love poemsnature poetry
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PK Colleran

I love words and their power to enrich our lives.

Editor of bilingual poetry collection Landscape of the Soul by Hipólito Sánchez, published by Cafh Foundation.

Translator of Living Consciously and Words Matter, by Jorge Waxemberg.

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  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Whoa! That was so cool. It really is fascinating how connected we are and what we share with the world/universe.

  • Maureen Colleran Batteyabout a year ago

    I came back to re-read this one. It’s so touching. Beautiful.

  • Gina B.about a year ago

    I had to look up ferrous. Excellent!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oooh. Very nicely done.

  • sleepy draftsabout a year ago

    This is so gorgeous. ❤️

  • Colt Hendersonabout a year ago

    Loved the picture and the imagery!

  • Colt Hendersonabout a year ago

    Loved the picture and the imagery!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, I really love how you did this 😍 I adore the connection between a baby’s heart and the beautiful, vast universe full of nebula! Super well done!

  • Maureen Colleran Batteyabout a year ago

    Beautiful and thought provoking.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Lovely!!! Left some love 💕💖😊

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