New Names on the Pages
Starting a new chapter
Did you catch that?
That little flip, the little break
It’s almost like
This novel I’m writing
Started a new chapter, all by itself
I can’t believe I almost missed it
But I think it's more than just a new chapter
It’s more like an entirely new part
An entirely new plot
The main character is still there
But she’s not exactly the same
She’s got those same key characteristics the reader remembers
But something in the inbetween changed
She seems a bit different, a bit off
You just can’t seem to tell what it is though
But there’s a new cast, new names
Maybe a few lingering ones from the last part
But they turn into the background characters
They’re not as important anymore
New names come forward
They litter the pages with their letters
Some names are a bit more special than others
Some names sear their marks into the pages
Some names come and go without another thought
But maybe that’s what it is
It’s those names
It’s those names that make her not quite the same anymore
Was it a good change? Does the reader still like her?
That’s very important, can’t have the reader reading a book they don’t like
With a main character they can’t relate to
But who’s to say that the onlooker is in charge of what she feels
Of what she does
Of who she talks to
Is it really that important?
Should she do what she does just to please the spectators?
Or should she do what she wants?
Sometimes it hurts to do what they say to,
But it’s not supposed to hurt
It's not supposed to make her feel uncomfortable
So maybe she’ll just do what she wants
But maybe she won’t
Maybe she‘ll ask those names
She’ll ask those new names what she should do
And see what they say
After all,
It’s those names that influence her the most
It’s those names that make her who she is.
About the Creator
Beau Green
i have an uncurable illness called 'teenage emotions', and you all have to deal with it. sorry not sorry.
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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