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Metamorphosis

By Dawn SaloisPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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I’ve always wanted to break free

This moment is what I’ve lived for

I am ready to create the new me

Don’t want to do what’s expected anymore

🦋

I fled from all I knew

Became torn down and broken

Eventually I changed and grew

Inside me new life was awoken

🦋

My evolution is complete

I am ready to make my debut

I am done with all the deceit

Ready to start my life anew

🦋

Those I knew will be angry

Their way of life upset

They all thought they knew me

But I no longer exist for their benefit

🦋

This poem was originally written for a writing challenge limited to 100 words. The theme was "Metamorphosis."

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About the Creator

Dawn Salois

Mother of a wonderful son. Writing is a relatively new passion of mine. I love to create my own images. Self-published author of Shadow and Flame.

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  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    Very inspiring ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🦋

  • This was so powerful!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fabulous!!! Loving it💕😊💖💕

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