I’ve always wanted to break free
This moment is what I’ve lived for
I am ready to create the new me
Don’t want to do what’s expected anymore
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I fled from all I knew
Became torn down and broken
Eventually I changed and grew
Inside me new life was awoken
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My evolution is complete
I am ready to make my debut
I am done with all the deceit
Ready to start my life anew
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Those I knew will be angry
Their way of life upset
They all thought they knew me
But I no longer exist for their benefit
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This poem was originally written for a writing challenge limited to 100 words. The theme was "Metamorphosis."
About the Creator
Dawn Salois
Mother of a wonderful son. Writing is a relatively new passion of mine. I love to create my own images. Self-published author of Shadow and Flame.
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Very inspiring ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🦋
This was so powerful!
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