The moments that truly count
To where not all are aware
The people you’re surrounded by
Becomes a blur
The meaningless conversations
Mindless topics
False sighted, caught up in a lost sighted thought for feelings
Living the egotistic dream world
Wearing materiel chasing fake plastic
Until a moment comes that changes your life
You start to see things differently
Becoming aware to the reality of your ego dream life
Fantastic aye!
So if for a moment I could say
In my last days, I’d spend my time with you
I’d savor each breathe to speak pure beauty
River flows scenery
Yet in my last breathe I’d say
I love you
About the Creator
BeeNines
Hello to everyone, welcome to my page!
My freestyle poetry is truly short and sweet! Just how I’d like my desserts.
Sometimes writing in a moment where it just can flow and it’s my way of expression also. Even to encourage others to smile.
Winner's Circle: Prompted #3
INTRODUCTION Prompted: #3 is over and done with. There were a total of 7 entries for this challenge, just like with Prompted #2. That was a bit surprising, considering this was a poetry challenge. The first poetry challenge garnered much more attention. Of course, one way to look at the drop in participation is that Vocal writers are not fans of the rondel.
By Randy Baker3 days ago in Writers
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