and i sailed
through stars
and oceans
and sapphire coruscations
with a compass
made of dreams
and i wept
for i knew
someday
i'd wake up
and i danced
by the gunports
like a shooting star
and made a wish
to dream forever
but i sighed
for i knew
someday
i'd wake up
and i gazed
at the lights
that bubbled
like mousseux
and spilt
from the sky
as i turned
the helm starboard
and i frowned
for i knew
someday
i'd wake up
and i climbed
to the crow's nest
and i cast
out my net
as i stared
with envy
at the lights
which danced
in the sky
and i plucked
the stars
from the heavens
and reeled
in the moon
and i withered
for i knew
someday
i'd wake up
and i frolicked
to the forepeak
and i tipped
the sun
overboard
into waters
of scarlet
and amber
and watched
as it floated
upwards
and it whispered
in my ear
as it rose
like an angel
dreams
can be chased
while awake
and i smiled
for i knew
it was time
to wake up
About the Creator
J. R. Lowe
By day, I'm a PhD student, by night.... I'm still a PhD student, but sometimes I procrastinate by writing on Vocal. Based in Australia.
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I love your words and the waves! Brilliant š