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Moon Threnody

On Listening To The Music of The Heavens

By Alison Tennent - The Celtic ChameleonPublished 3 months ago 2 min read
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Image Poetry - using the lines from the poem as prompts, I created images to complement my poem. I think the effect is interesting. I hope you will agree.

Moon Threnody

daddy sang me the secret song of the Moon in a round rich tenor

by virtue of distance the melody inaudible

a threnody lost to the heavens

but my daddy had heard it long ago, and sang it for me

on a sun strewn library floor squirming with excitement

coarse carpet squares, aggravating itch inconsequential 

when holding in grubby palms rocks from the surface of our satellite

reverence temporarily struck me soundless

our Moon voyages steadfastly round us

as Voyager sailed dauntless through space

recording interstellar vibrations translated to sound

fantastical echoes from unfathomable dimensions

space prospectors were aghast to discover

the dark side of the Moon replete with inhuman cadence

unfamiliar harmonies invited trepidation

as the Moon turned his great aspect toward shaken supplicants

sometimes I dream of swimming between the stars 

eternal moondust lapping at bottomless night

for I have heard the forbidden voices of the planets

writhing and straining in technology's snare

and if I should awaken adrift in the firmament 

what horrifying wonders would he finally sing

as he turned his fearful face to me

and his true and terrible voice 

drew my breath from my lungs

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daddy sang me the secret song of the Moon in a round rich tenor

by virtue of distance the melody inaudible

a threnody lost to the heavens

but my daddy had heard it long ago, and sang it for me

on a sun strewn library floor squirming with excitement

coarse carpet squares, aggravating itch inconsequential 

when holding in grubby palms rocks from the surface of our satellite

reverence temporarily struck me soundless

our Moon voyages steadfastly round us

as Voyager sailed dauntless through space

recording interstellar vibrations translated to sound

fantastical echoes from unfathomable dimensions

space prospectors were aghast to discover

the dark side of the Moon replete with inhuman cadence

unfamiliar harmonies invited trepidation

as the Moon turned his great aspect toward shaken supplicants

sometimes I dream of swimming between the stars 

eternal moondust lapping at bottomless night

for I have heard the forbidden voices of the planets

writhing and straining in technology's snare

and if I should awaken adrift in the firmament 

what horrifying wonders would he finally sing

as he turned his fearful face to me

and his true and terrible voice

drew my breath

from my lungs

---

This piece was inspired by muse for the extremely unsettling music of the heavens, recorded by Voyager, hurtling through space.

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Alison Tennent - The Celtic Chameleon

Just open your veins and write.

Find me on Substack https://celticchameleon.substack.com/

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