Mommy Loves You
A mother's love knows no boundaries
Old Man Winston sat on a wall
He taunted the children who walked by
Their parents often heard them call
He always escaped as he was so sly
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Old Man Winston went too far
The children threw stones at him
Hard enough so his body began to mar
He was laughed at by Little Boy Jim
~~~~~
Old Man Winston wanted revenge
On all of those pesky children
Little Boy Jim was sitting on a bench
He crept closer while staying hidden
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Little Boy Jim's mother, Mrs. Milton
Saw him approach her oblivious son
She quickly tackled Old Man Winston
He tried his might but couldn’t run
~~~~~
Mrs. Milton called out to her son
Dinner was cooked and ready on the table
There were dishes more than one
Meat of Old Man Winston, it's true not fable
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Dharrsheena Raja Segarran
My mental health decline brought along a lot of Darkness and I embraced it. This Darkness flows out in the form of Horror Stories and Dark Poetry 🖤
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Comments (23)
Awesome ❤️😉
Brilliant work Dharrsheena!!!!
Wow!!!💖
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Diabolical twist. Lovely is your dark beautiful mind my friend. Such creativity.
Wow what an amazing story. I could visualize old man Winston from your words. Brilliant!
Seriously?!! Unexpected 😈😈
Wow!👏❤😊💕
Oh my goodness! What a twist! :o
I'm suddenly not hungry. Lol. That was great
You’re a good karma cook!
Love it! That describes the protective mama to a T!
Interesting read. Was old man Winston a meatloaf or a steak?
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Excellent point about antagonizing people~
As a nutritionist, do you recommend adding Old Man Winston to your diet? 😎
I liked the twist at the end. At the end of the fourth stanza, would the final be better if it were: But try as he might, he couldn't run.
Oh snap!! Don't mess with mommas!!! Loved everything about this, so well done :)
Chills!!! This was amazing, wow!!!
In awe at how well you tell a story within your poetry - well done!
Wow!! Got me!
When is dinner served? 🥰
Oooh dear , nice twist
Loved this, and loved the ending!!
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