Lovely Distraction
A Love Poem
Dominated me while I tried to cook dinner.
I wasn’t able to finish the sides…
Slid his hands between my thighs.
Teasing me…
Really staring into my eyes.
A little harder, I said.
Call me someone else’s name.
Told him to go with it.
I love that there’s no shame.
Once a day we play this game.
Neighbors too distracted to hear a thing.
About the Creator
Real Poetic
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OK, so obviously, it's an amazing Top story, but this was so good. I loved this poem.
All these perverts you brought out of the woods. Made Naomi into a teaser. Such bad girls everywhere. Don't you just love it all. Lovely and beautiful to be a part of it all.
Your words beautifully capture the allure and secrecy of this intimate relationship, drawing me into the experience. Well done on creating such an evocative piece.👏💕🥰
Great!! When’s dinner? 😜 Congratulations on the recognition! 🥇
Good job
You got that stank pen lol
Dear Mz. P ~ You always tantalize me to read between the lines with your 'Perfect-Prose' ~ Ah, we never know how we might be interpreted; as you so know. Coincidence: I've just written a 'You Never Know Piece' "Am I Choosing UP?" That so many can relate to ~ In their own way ~ That's the fun with all of this ~ - With Respect - 'J' Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -
Oooo, this was so intimate! Loved it! Congratulations on your Top Story!
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Wonderful
Nicely done!
This is so cool and damn hot all at once - Good Job!
Wonderful words and congratulations on your top story, I can see the steam rising
Love this. The intrigue and sexiness in the easy organic unfolding of this and even in what isn't written. This is so well done, congratulations!
BEAUTIFUL I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! GIVE ME MORE !!!!!!!!!!
I read this at work and got too sweaty to comment 😅 But now I'm home. This was spicy and sensual in all the right places; amazing work and congrats on TS! 😍❤️
I might need a cold shower after that!!! Congrats, Real Poetic! And you’re right. no shame required.
Mmmmhh
Nicelynphrased and suggested. Good job.
Congratulations on your Top Story
Passionate and very nicely done. Congrats on the TS
I love how the passion and playfulness seem so natural here, and you fit it neatly into the confines of an acrostic poem. You are so talented!
Love!! Get it! 😂💕