Unleavened disaster, unleft and unbaked
Have I not a different heart for you to take
My basket lies cradled between your two arms
Soft pieces scattered within will come to no harm
Seen from here, you are all; tower, you cliff face
For hours, I could scale you, but it isn't a race
Unlike soft pieces that haven't shell or crust
Your entity is whole, your foundation is trust
But here lies the result, the efforts I've made
Better than nothing, held here open and afraid
Enough is a word I have never once endured
From your lips, if it'd pull free, I'd have the whole world
My basket is safe though my wares may be lacking
You carry me onward, no stumbles, no cracking
Stone eyes won't soften but stone arms will not bend
My baking's not finished;
this isn't the end
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Corwynna
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