Come and meet me
Where galaxies die
And hearts collide
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Come and dance with me
Across supernovas
With love that stretches galaxies
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Come and take a ride with me
And surf the rings of Saturn
To match the ones we'll wear
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Come and sit with me
As we ride our orbit around this star
And we'll watch the sunrise on the beach
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Come lay back with me
The stars are so bright tonight
But not as bright as down here
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Come and marry me
Beneath the summer sun
And we'll spend our lives together
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Come and get old with me
There is beauty in a dying star
And of the life we have ahead
About the Creator
Luke Foster
Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.
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Whispering Woods Challenge Winners
Congratulations to Morgan Christy Rickards for their winning Whispering Woods story, Guardian at the Gate. Morgan has been a Vocal creator since February 2021, and this is their first time placing in Challenge — well done, starting with a win! Guardian at the Gate draws evocatively from Welsh tales of the Cantre'r Gwaelod, a lost sunken kingdom between the forest and the sea. Heledd’s dangerous adventure pulls her towards the water but her spirit is anchored in the woods: Morgan’s writing is atmospheric and exciting.
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Comments (12)
I'm a sucker for celestial romance, this is fantastic!
very moving
That was really lovely ❤️
I enjoyed your poem. 💖
Nice poem. Well crafted.
Simple yet deep. Very clever writing . Congratulations my friend and best wishes for the future.👍
Congratulations and a beautiful poem
This was so lovely and wonderful!
wow. So romantic. It's beautiful.
Such a Beautiful poem
Just beautiful!
Brilliant!