Lost
A Seventh Piece of Dark Poetry. When You Are Lost In A Dark Place With No Way Out.
This is my seventh dark poem for Dharrsheena.
Tο»Ώhe music is "You Want It Darker" by Leonard Cohen from his final album, but maybe you don't want it darker. I certainly don't.
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You Canβt Remember Who You Are
How You Have Come To Be This Far
From Feeling Confident And Safe
Feeling Threatened By Fear And Hate
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Every Direction Is Wrong
The Feeling Of Dread Is Strong
Thereβs One Way In But No Way Out
Every Thought Fills You With Doubt
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You Know There Will Be No Escape
Your End Assured By This Dark Fate
How It Will Come You Do Not Know
Lost In Your Mind, Death Says Hello
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You Are Exhausted, You Lay Down
A Body In Unhallowed Ground
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Wonderful, Mike! I loved your words and your image is fantastic!
This perfectly portrayed how I'm feeling now. Super relatable! 'Lost in your mind, death says hello' is my favourite line! Thank you sooooo much for all these dark poems! They truly make my day!
Loved it. very somber.