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It's a Scam

by Hufflecup about a month ago in social commentary
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we could have stayed in Eden

We work too much

And enjoy too little

Is this really what life is for

Working so we can afford a place to sleep

If god really created humans and his plan for us was living under capitalism

Then, politely, fuck god

Cause they wrote about a bomb ass garden

With every comfort a human could need

and broke one rule

got themselves kicked out

and cursed all of humanity

keeping us from this paradise

now we have capitalism

and we aren't all aware this is a scam?

clearly one group wanted everything to themselves

so they needed a reason why we couldn't all just share

so don't sin

sinning means you deserve all the bad things that happen

and have to fend for yourself

no handouts

social commentary

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I want nothing more than to dedicate my life to writing, so I figured I would start here to test the waters. I will be submitting stories to as many communities as possible.

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