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In The Silence I am Safe

An ode to silence - S

By AlfiyaPublished 2 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
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silent sound

seeping slowly

supplementing...

saving souls

speaking softly

supplying solace

sitting still

surrendering seconds

saying, "Stay"

so silently...

still, somebody strides superciliously

still, somebody speaks severely

still, sabotaging selves strangely

selecting sorrowful streets

submerging self-pity

sordid souls

striving, seeking silence...

some sickened societies

subdividing

segregating

secluding

sharp scissors snipping safety

supporting sternforemost surmises

scattering symptoms

substantiating sickly schemes

suffering steadily

slanting sideways

slipping

sinking

silence sought...

silent sound

seeping slowly

supplementing...

saving souls

speaking softly

supplying solace

sitting still

surrendering seconds

saying, "Stay"

so silently...

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Alfiya

Love words and their origin. Like poetry. Rumi is my favorite.

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  • Mohamed Jakkath2 months ago

    ๐ŸŽจ "In The Silence I am Safe" ๐ŸŒŒ An ode to the power of silence beautifully expressed through alliteration and repetition. ๐Ÿ’ญ The imagery of seeping sound and surrendering seconds creates a serene atmosphere. ๐ŸŒŸ The contrast of stillness and chaos in society is depicted through sharp scissors and sickened souls. ๐ŸŒŠ The poem invites us to seek solace in the silence amidst the turmoil of life. ๐Ÿ™

  • Mohamed Jakkath2 months ago

    This is a beautiful ode to the power of silence. ๐Ÿ™ The use of alliteration and repetition adds to the poetic flow of the piece. ๐ŸŒŸ It reminds us that in moments of stillness and quiet, we can find solace and safety. ๐Ÿ’›

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Lovely, especially the tiny bird in the tree.

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Brilliant & beautiful!!! Loving it!!!

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