I See, I see you
Yet I remain unmoving.
Complacent, my eyes, they watch
They see, they see you.
My hands, they shudder, they wait
For what?
I See, I see you
Listening, my ears, they long
They long, for you.
Your voice, so sweet, so far...
away.
I See, I see you
My heart, it trips, it stutters
Of age, it grows weak
It longs, for you...
I See, I see you
I can almost feel you, hear you
I long, for you
Mama, hold me
I want to feel you
Hear you, See you
Again.
Mama?
RS.
About the Creator
SM Nolan
An aspiring author following through on a long overlooked ambition. Re-discovering myself due to a life altering injury and kindling a passion for words and story. I hope you enjoy. Read, enjoy, comment...stay awhile.
-SM
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. I can feel your longing and love to reunite with your loved ones, as I too wait for the day too, when I can also finally reunite with them. Cheers and you have a good day. ^^