Going through the motions
Without any notions
Of taking on any life change.
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Then you came along,
And you sang a new song,
With ideas of a different range.
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You became my true friend,
Helped me learn how to mend,
And believe in the power of good.
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In your arms, I am free
To accept the real me,
And now - finally - I'm understood.
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I get caught in your gaze.
I've been smiling for days.
As we seek to find new ways to give.
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At last, I've begun
To experience fun.
In short, you've shown me how to live.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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Fantastic!
This is beautiful.
❤️😍🥰love this poem