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Your love for me waned,
Constricting and strangling me,
Turning my lips blue.
About the Creator
Shelley Carroll
Ms. Carroll is a 40-something year-old veteran public servant and mother of three adult children. She and her partner Hal live in Amherst NS with a sweet, anxiety-ridden rescue dog. Shelley loves running, red wine, and laughter.
She/Her
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Excellent!!!
Good imagery!