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Half Past Noon

Limerick Lunch Break

By Veronica Published about a year ago 1 min read
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Half past noon,

I forgot to bring my spoon,

but the lunch meeting goes on,

so slurp it till it's gone,

yet I'm the great buffoon!

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Veronica

I am the moss silken on watered stones, rooted deep in rich soil. Earthen creature, I am the night sky -starry and strayed from the forgotten path of poets - I am, the chatter from the iron rails rattling as the train carries itself home.

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  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Nice!💕😊

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Splendid!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕

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