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Getting Old

Getting Along

By Moe RadosevichPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Getting Old
Photo by Dmitry Shamis on Unsplash

I can’t run anymore,

but I still score,

I just hit home runs,

I don’t see the way I could,

but I see what I should,

that is good.

my hearing is gone,

can’t find it at all,

so, give a loud shout,

should you give me a call.

driving these days is really crazy,

my foot, it tends to get lazy,

pushing the gas,

I don’t go so fast,

it’s like driving Miss Daisy,

and shopping is tiring,

surely not desiring,

I just shop on line,

hit the checkout line,

while in my chair retiring.

so, as you may see,

old age has come to me, but

I take it with heart,

still eat what’s tart and acting the part,

just trying to look smart.

Sure hope you all enjoy this, was fun writing it, all fact, no fiction here, 😂😂

Thank you for reading!!

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Moe Radosevich

I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you

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Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you

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  • Lea Springerabout a year ago

    Yeah, like the saying goes, Old age ain't for sissies!

  • I think this is by far the only positive thing I've seen on the topic of ageing. Well done!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Moving forward with style, my friend! You are so optimistic and I love it. You are an inspiration! ❤️

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Moving forward and adapting along the way. Love it ❤️

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Been there, done that, still there , still doing that. Good one, Moe!

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    Your optimistic and adaptable approach to aging is truly inspiring!

  • Subhi Najarabout a year ago

    great post

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