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Freedive

by RN Manchester about a month ago in surreal poetry / nature poetry
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A poem.

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🤿

Take hold of a rock,

And a deep breath.

Over the side,

Into the depth.

⇣

Pulling me down,

Clearing my ears.

Downward I go;

Having no fears.

⇣

The surface above

Grows so far away.

How long can I last,

In this dark place.

⇣

If I continue down,

I may pass out.

How long, I wonder,

Can my breath hold out?

⇣

No feeling of touch;

No voices to hear.

Just the water,

Cool and clear.

⇣

The water feels good,

Cool on my skin.

The abyss below,

Too deep to discern.

⇣

Deeper and deeper,

Into the depths.

How long, I wonder,

Can I hold my breath?

⇣

Now I’m quite deep,

Relaxed and clear.

I hope and pray,

No panic, no fear.

⇣

I could stay,

In this cool dark place.

Drifting downward,

To my watery grave.

😌

But there is no point,

Of leaving life now.

There’s so much beauty,

All-around.

💙

Releasing the rock;

Back toward the sun.

A gentle kick,

To carry me on.

🫧

Upward forever,

With bubbles, I rise.

Toward the surface,

Until the next time.

⤴

Copyright © 2022 by RN Manchester. All Rights Reserved.

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About the author

RN Manchester

I write mostly short stories and some poetry. Pretty much any genre, though I lean toward science fiction, fantasy and horror. I try to publish at least once a week.

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  • Sara Larcaabout a month ago

    Love! Is this the poem you were talking about the other day? Oh and HI! I made it - I used the link you provided so I hopefully you got the credit! I just submitted to "The Day After" contest! Thank you so much for turning me onto this site!!!

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