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Fade into blue

a bitter cold end

By Heather HublerPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
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Vasoconstriction,

Inevitability–

Hypothermia.

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Written for the blue haiku challenge and for Cathy Holmes. I did it in three words!

Here is Cathy's entry in which she only used three words as well:

Here is another of my entries if you'd like to read more:

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Heather Hubler

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  • Poppy2 months ago

    Incredibly talented as usual!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    A complete story in 3 words to go with the image. Well done!

  • Amazing. This is another one Paul has lifted up that I missed before.

  • RM Stockton2 months ago

    Whoa! That is amazing what you did with only three words. Perfectly done, Heather!

  • Fantastic 💜💯

  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    Incredible work! Absolutely stunning haiku. Never would have thought three words could be so powerful. 👏👏👏

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    OOF! Absolutely amazing, Heather!

  • Donna Renee2 months ago

    That was epic!! 🤯👏

  • Gerald Holmes2 months ago

    Just Wow!!! So well done.

  • Paul Stewart3 months ago

    Dunno where my comment disappeared to, was looking at this for research. This is still as sublime as it was when I first read it, word nerd! Fin!

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  • Gina C.10 months ago

    These 3-word ones are so amazing!! I feel like I learned something new with "vasoconstriction" ☺️❤️ Great work!!

  • Sissi Smith10 months ago

    Medical terminology is my love language. I like this one. ;)

  • Whoaaaa, this blew my mind! It never crossed my mind that we can use just one word for the 5 7 5 syllables. This was awesome!

  • Ah got it now , excellent words, likely another Top Story

  • Babs Iverson10 months ago

    Impressive!!!💕😊💖

  • C. H. Richard10 months ago

    Wow awesome job! 💙💙💙

  • Cathy holmes10 months ago

    Yes! Yes! and Yes!

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