Do You Feel It Too?
I heard it in the whispering wind, / While caressing the potency of the moon
I heard it in the whispering wind,
While caressing the potency of the moon
And speaking in tongues of fire
To the excellence of tides.
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I heard it in the intangible frailty of time,
While singing the immutable song of beauty
And recreating the poetry of humankind
From the comfort of my self-confidence.
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And now I feel it rushing through my veins,
Pouring its essence into my spirit,
Blessing my heart with new beats.
Do you feel it too?
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Do you feel this new Word,
This new shaft of light
Gushing like bloodlines
Across the Milky Way of your vision?
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Close your eyes,
And dive into the pond of oblivion,
Where every pearl of expression
Dances in the sunset of deep meanings.
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Silence will now be your muse,
Inviting you to heed the message
Of the One who created you in His image.
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I heard it in the whispering wind,
While caressing the potency of the moon
And speaking in tongues of fire
To the excellence of tides.
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Do you hear it too?
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©2011 Cendrine Marrouat
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Cendrine Marrouat
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Comments (37)
Wonderful poem
Wow. I felt it … Be still . 🥰
Wow! This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read. I love it.
Wonderful wonderful poem, just gorgeous and sublime. I hear it everyday, everywhere; what a needed and beautiful reminder to stop and listen for it. Thank you for writing it and so many congratulations on getting Top Story! 🎉 💕 😊
I do not consider myself religious, but the imagery in this was extremely thought provoking. Well done!!!
I think I already read this way down below. But second time is the charm. Very lovely indeed. TS. Yes.
very good loved the imagery
Congrats ⚡️
Nice piece.
Nice write up
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Nice
Nice
Actually, I did hear it! Great effect and great poem, Cendrine!
Lovely! Congratulations!
Awesome!!! Love it!!! Congratulations on T S too!!!💖💖💕
Congratulations 🎉 💖📝
Oh wow, Cendrine! This was stunning. I loved the repeated lines and how the question at the end just hung there. Congratulations on Top Story. Amazing work :)
This is so well penned. Loved every line. Well done.
Beautiful and inspiring.
Keep it up . Good work.
Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Cendrine!!! I love this gorgeous poem! Such vivid imagery! Congrats on top story!
This is gorgeous. Gorgeous. Well done on Top Story!
This is LOVELY!! I love the imagery so much!!!
This is beautiful. Congrats on the TS