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Do You Feel It Too?

I heard it in the whispering wind, / While caressing the potency of the moon

By Cendrine MarrouatPublished 7 days ago 1 min read
Photo credit: Cendrine Marrouat - creativeramblings.com

I heard it in the whispering wind,

While caressing the potency of the moon

And speaking in tongues of fire

To the excellence of tides.


I heard it in the intangible frailty of time,

While singing the immutable song of beauty

And recreating the poetry of humankind

From the comfort of my self-confidence.


And now I feel it rushing through my veins,

Pouring its essence into my spirit,

Blessing my heart with new beats.

Do you feel it too?


Do you feel this new Word,

This new shaft of light

Gushing like bloodlines

Across the Milky Way of your vision?


Close your eyes,

And dive into the pond of oblivion,

Where every pearl of expression

Dances in the sunset of deep meanings.


Silence will now be your muse,

Inviting you to heed the message

Of the One who created you in His image.


I heard it in the whispering wind,

While caressing the potency of the moon

And speaking in tongues of fire

To the excellence of tides.


Do you hear it too?


©2011 Cendrine Marrouat


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Cendrine Marrouat

Writer & Author⎜Photographer⎜Artist⎜Co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms / A Warm Mug of Cozy⎜(Co-)creator of literary forms

"The Train: A Short Story" is out!

Website: https://creativeramblings.com

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  • Tabish Malik2 days ago

    Wonderful poem

  • Scott Wade3 days ago

    Wow. I felt it … Be still . 🥰

  • Pamela Williams3 days ago

    Wow! This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read. I love it.

  • Mackenzie Davis3 days ago

    Wonderful wonderful poem, just gorgeous and sublime. I hear it everyday, everywhere; what a needed and beautiful reminder to stop and listen for it. Thank you for writing it and so many congratulations on getting Top Story! 🎉 💕 😊

  • Ian Read4 days ago

    I do not consider myself religious, but the imagery in this was extremely thought provoking. Well done!!!

  • Novel Allen4 days ago

    I think I already read this way down below. But second time is the charm. Very lovely indeed. TS. Yes.

  • very good loved the imagery

  • Nice piece.

  • Ghulam Abbas5 days ago

    Very Good written, MashaAllah, Nice Work.... And do check out my profile

  • Nice

  • Nice

  • Lamar Wiggins5 days ago

    Actually, I did hear it! Great effect and great poem, Cendrine!

  • Lovely! Congratulations!

  • Babs Iverson5 days ago

    Awesome!!! Love it!!! Congratulations on T S too!!!💖💖💕

  • Congratulations 🎉 💖📝

  • Heather Hubler6 days ago

    Oh wow, Cendrine! This was stunning. I loved the repeated lines and how the question at the end just hung there. Congratulations on Top Story. Amazing work :)

  • Gerald Holmes6 days ago

    This is so well penned. Loved every line. Well done.

  • Lana V Lynx6 days ago

    Beautiful and inspiring.

  • Keep it up . Good work.

  • Kristen Balyeat6 days ago

    Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Cendrine!!! I love this gorgeous poem! Such vivid imagery! Congrats on top story!

  • Paul Stewart6 days ago

    This is gorgeous. Gorgeous. Well done on Top Story!

  • This is LOVELY!! I love the imagery so much!!!

  • Cathy holmes6 days ago

    This is beautiful. Congrats on the TS

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