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Do You Feel It Too?

I heard it in the whispering wind, / While caressing the potency of the moon

By Cendrine MarrouatPublished 11 months ago Updated 9 months ago 2 min read
Top Story - May 2023
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Do You Feel It Too?

I heard it in the whispering wind,

While caressing the potency of the moon

And speaking in tongues of fire

To the excellence of tides.

I heard it in the intangible frailty of time,

While singing the immutable song of beauty

And recreating the poetry of humankind

From the comfort of my self-confidence.

And now I feel it rushing through my veins,

Pouring its essence into my spirit,

Blessing my heart with new beats.

Do you feel it too?

Do you feel this new Word,

This new shaft of light

Gushing like bloodlines

Across the Milky Way of your vision?

Close your eyes,

And dive into the pond of oblivion,

Where every pearl of expression

Dances in the sunset of deep meanings.

Silence will now be your muse,

Inviting you to heed the message

Of the One who created you in His image.

I heard it in the whispering wind,

While caressing the potency of the moon

And speaking in tongues of fire

To the excellence of tides.

Do you hear it too?

©2011 Cendrine Marrouat

That's it for today! Thank you for reading!

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Cendrine Marrouat is a writer, photographer, podcaster, blogger, anthology editor, and the co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms and A Warm Cup of Cozy. She has authored and co-authored more than 40 books, including The Train: A Short Story (2023), In Her Own Words: A Collection of Short Stories & Flashku (2022), After the Fires of Day: Haiku Inspired by Kahlil Gibran & Alphonse de Lamartine (2021), Rhythm Flourishing: A Collection of Kindku and Sixku (2020), Walks: A Collection of Haiku (2019-2020), and In the Silence of Words: A Three-Act Play (2018).

Cendrine's work has appeared in many publications. She is the creator of the Sixku, Flashku, Sepigram, and Reminigram; as well as the co-creator of the Kindku, Pareiku, Vardhaku, and Hemingku.

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About the Creator

Cendrine Marrouat

Writer & Author⎜Photographer⎜Artist⎜Co-founder of Auroras & Blossoms / A Warm Mug of Cozy⎜(Co-)creator of literary forms

"The Train: A Short Story" is out!

Website: https://creativeramblings.com

Donations: https://ko-fi.com/cendrineartist

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  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydred9 months ago

    A wonderful poem that I had missed, so glad i found it

  • J. S. Wade11 months ago

    Wow. I felt it … Be still . 🥰

  • Wow! This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read. I love it.

  • Mackenzie Davis11 months ago

    Wonderful wonderful poem, just gorgeous and sublime. I hear it everyday, everywhere; what a needed and beautiful reminder to stop and listen for it. Thank you for writing it and so many congratulations on getting Top Story! 🎉 💕 😊

  • Ian Read11 months ago

    I do not consider myself religious, but the imagery in this was extremely thought provoking. Well done!!!

  • Novel Allen11 months ago

    I think I already read this way down below. But second time is the charm. Very lovely indeed. TS. Yes.

  • very good loved the imagery

  • Saka Jamiu Olaniyi11 months ago

    Nice piece.

  • Gift john11 months ago

    Nice write up

  • Ghulam Abbas11 months ago

    Very Good written, MashaAllah, Nice Work.... And do check out my profile

  • Motivational Bucks11 months ago

    Nice

  • Shahid ur Rehman11 months ago

    Nice

  • Lamar Wiggins11 months ago

    Actually, I did hear it! Great effect and great poem, Cendrine!

  • Heather Zieffle 11 months ago

    Lovely! Congratulations!

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Awesome!!! Love it!!! Congratulations on T S too!!!💖💖💕

  • Congratulations 🎉 💖📝

  • Heather Hubler11 months ago

    Oh wow, Cendrine! This was stunning. I loved the repeated lines and how the question at the end just hung there. Congratulations on Top Story. Amazing work :)

  • Gerald Holmes11 months ago

    This is so well penned. Loved every line. Well done.

  • Lana V Lynx11 months ago

    Beautiful and inspiring.

  • Keep it up . Good work.

  • Kristen Balyeat11 months ago

    Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, Cendrine!!! I love this gorgeous poem! Such vivid imagery! Congrats on top story!

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    This is gorgeous. Gorgeous. Well done on Top Story!

  • Cezanne Libellen11 months ago

    This is LOVELY!! I love the imagery so much!!!

  • Cathy holmes11 months ago

    This is beautiful. Congrats on the TS

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