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Diving In

by Alfiya Laxmidhar 6 months ago in surreal poetry
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3rd April 2022

Diving In
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Liquid of life

Licked like an elixir that will save me


Melting masculinity

You were once a warrior


Feminine freedom



Generous mother

May heaven honor your gifts


Fighting father

Falling is not a failure


Brave brother

Being kind is your strength


Strong sister

Stand up and believe in what you think is right


Forgiving friends

Favor the helpless over the ones you envy


Remarkable child

Channel those who give you comfort


Prayerful partner

Mirror of life


Precious pet

Protector and guardian of my fate


Fellow human

Let love lead the way

surreal poetry

About the author

Alfiya Laxmidhar

Love words and their origin. Like poetry. Rumi is my favorite.

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