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distraction madness

playing for keeps

By River JoyPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
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"What's He Building in There?" River 2018

Doubling down on the kicked dog disappearing act

Intensely fired up while your heart breaks

Strange we find ourselves here again

Tangible mistakes

Repetitive stakes

All but given up

Can't find myself here again

Tangled up in our own darkness

Innocent no more

Over the moon with her madness

Never again to feel her touch

surreal poetry
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River Joy

I make things with paint and words and light. I was once described as an asshole with Mr. Rogers vibes.

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  • Celia in Underland25 days ago

    🤍 Amazing juxtapositions x

  • Judey Kalchik 25 days ago

    Between 'over the moon with her madness' and the pre-werewolf image: I feel the distraction of attraction burning.

  • Andrei Z.11 months ago

    River, it was a delightfully sad and heartfelt piece! Enjoyed it!

  • Gina C.11 months ago

    "Tangled up in our own darkness" -- I felt that so much. This is such an emotional poem -- wonderfully penned. Amazing job!

  • wow, right in the feels, it's so early to hit so hard. Great job

  • Mariann Carroll11 months ago

    That was an heartbreaking ending 😔Excellent work

  • Dana Stewart11 months ago

    Somber and heartfelt in its delivery. Speaking of, I miss hearing you read the poem!

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