"What's He Building in There?" River 2018
Doubling down on the kicked dog disappearing act
Intensely fired up while your heart breaks
Strange we find ourselves here again
Tangible mistakes
Repetitive stakes
All but given up
Can't find myself here again
Tangled up in our own darkness
Innocent no more
Over the moon with her madness
Never again to feel her touch
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River Joy
I make things with paint and words and light. I was once described as an asshole with Mr. Rogers vibes.
Comments (8)
🤍 Amazing juxtapositions x
Between 'over the moon with her madness' and the pre-werewolf image: I feel the distraction of attraction burning.
River, it was a delightfully sad and heartfelt piece! Enjoyed it!
"Tangled up in our own darkness" -- I felt that so much. This is such an emotional poem -- wonderfully penned. Amazing job!
wow, right in the feels, it's so early to hit so hard. Great job
That was an heartbreaking ending 😔Excellent work
Somber and heartfelt in its delivery. Speaking of, I miss hearing you read the poem!
Beautiful and sad, very compelling writing👏Pernoste