Dissociate
An acrostic poem.
Dang.
I lost myself again.
Staring;
Trepedatiously into the void,
Realizing reality is gone.
Again.
Can't let myself wander
Too long or I fall apart completely.
Indefinite pauses lead to lapses in judgment.
Obfuscated thoughts, tongue-tied, stuck in the mud -
Never finding a way out until I'm drowning in to-dos.
About the Creator
Ashley Lima
BA and MA in English Creative Writing. Novelist, short story writer, and poet in my free time.
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Outstanding
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Compelling and original writing
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Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Writing reflected the title & theme
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Comments (3)
Good one Ashley & Excellent topic. I wish more people knew more about dissociative states!
Excellently formed poem
Wow! This is so beautifully well-written. You capture the feeling of drifting off, perfectly. π