Dandelion Dreams
get carried away
A wisp of fluff floats,
Coddled by warm summer air–
Sheltering new life
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Written for the Quadru-haiku challenge.
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Outstanding, way to go girl 👏🎉
Masterful poem Heather. Moving. Congrats 🥰
Well done 💕💖💖
Well deserving top story my friend. Beautiful 😻
Sheltering new life But also Harboring new life Too
love it!
Brief but powerful.
I love this
gorgeous work! Congrats on your Top Story! 😊
Earthy, Poetic, and Light, perfect.
Awesome word choices, the title and all. Loved it! 👏👏👏
Love the imagery!
Heather, this poem is beautiful! Comforting lazy summer day vibes.
Beautiful!!! Congrats on top story
Love the title and subtitle!
Congratulations on Top Story, my friend!! 🥰🥰 I love this one so much ❤️
Well done and congratulations.
Ouu, I just love this. ❤️ Beautifully done!!
I loved this one. Last line again! "Sheltering new life"... pretty cool for reasons that are far too involved to put here. LOL
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When there's a whole mega, multi-part series encapsulated with perfect balance in a haiku. Mind blown! Girl. FRIEND-DAHHH!
Last line is a home run Heather. You also might like to know, in Ireland we call them 'Jinny-Joes'
So light and airy. Congratulations on Top Story!
Excellent!! Congratulations 🎊 on your top story
So beautiful! I love this. Congratulations on another well deserved Top Story!