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Dandelion Dreams

get carried away

By Heather HublerPublished 18 days ago 1 min read
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A wisp of fluff floats,

Coddled by warm summer air–

Sheltering new life

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Written for the Quadru-haiku challenge.

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Heather Hubler

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  • Vivin Akshay8 days ago

    See A Glance If You Like Dream Poetry 👉👉https://vocal.media/poets/dreams-a-journey-through-the-mind

  • Mariann Carroll11 days ago

    Outstanding, way to go girl 👏🎉

  • Scott Wade12 days ago

    Masterful poem Heather. Moving. Congrats 🥰

  • Babs Iverson14 days ago

    Well done 💕💖💖

  • Well deserving top story my friend. Beautiful 😻

  • Thavien Yliaster14 days ago

    Sheltering new life But also Harboring new life Too

  • Ash Taylor14 days ago

    love it!

  • Frank Racioppi15 days ago

    Brief but powerful.

  • Daniel Jeyaraman15 days ago

    Just awesome! 🥰

  • Janice Daily15 days ago

    I love this

  • Tiffany Gordon 15 days ago

    gorgeous work! Congrats on your Top Story! 😊

  • Earthy, Poetic, and Light, perfect.

  • Lamar Wiggins15 days ago

    Awesome word choices, the title and all. Loved it! 👏👏👏

  • Rayn B15 days ago

    Love the imagery!

  • Heather, this poem is beautiful! Comforting lazy summer day vibes.

  • Poppy the Poet15 days ago

    Beautiful!!! Congrats on top story

  • Love the title and subtitle!

  • Gina C.15 days ago

    Congratulations on Top Story, my friend!! 🥰🥰 I love this one so much ❤️

  • Joe Patterson15 days ago

    Well done and congratulations.

  • sleepy drafts15 days ago

    Ouu, I just love this. ❤️ Beautifully done!!

  • I loved this one. Last line again! "Sheltering new life"... pretty cool for reasons that are far too involved to put here. LOL

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  • The Dani Writer16 days ago

    When there's a whole mega, multi-part series encapsulated with perfect balance in a haiku. Mind blown! Girl. FRIEND-DAHHH!

  • Dean F. Hardy16 days ago

    Last line is a home run Heather. You also might like to know, in Ireland we call them 'Jinny-Joes'

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