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Cheeseburger Plain & Dry

A Wiggle and a Giggle

By Rick HenryPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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This is a Prompt Challenge from the facebook group Vocal + Assist. https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist

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I ordered a cheeseburger with the works

Add avocado with raw onion

The waitress took my order then moved to mom and did a twerk

Mom ordered cheeseburger plain and dry

The waitress asked if she wanted tater tots or fries

Mother answered fries

The waitress left our table with a jiggle and as she walked she wiggled

When our food arrived

"Ummm the food is good," mom said with a giggle…

Gobble, gobble, gobble mom ate her food up to the end

Now for chocolate cream pie she'll share it with a friend

The moral of this story is that if you eat up all your dinner

You will be the winner

And you'll finish with dessert with a wiggle and a giggle…

My mom eating her cheeseburger plain and dry at our favorite restaurant

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About the Creator

Rick Henry

Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.

https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist

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  • Babs Iverson26 days ago

    Outstanding!!! Love it!!!

  • Jo Cro2 months ago

    Super, well written!

  • Great job, congrats!!

  • Frederick Harmon2 months ago

    Funny!

  • U.Rdiya2 months ago

    Funny! Congratulations on your top story.

  • Thayrile2 months ago

    So Fun, congratulations 🎉🎈

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  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Fun poem! Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Super fun! Congrats! 🎉🎉🎉

  • Jason Basaraba2 months ago

    Way to go, Top story. Two winners from prompts love it.

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Yay. congrats Rick

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! Love the Jiggle Prompt

  • Wow Rick this is awesome 😎 congrats on the top story 😊

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Awesome!’ Congratulations 🎉 on top story

  • Fun poem and congrats on your top story

  • Jason Basaraba2 months ago

    Sorry, plain dry bun …..not my style. But this poem was. I liked it

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Mmm! Avocado and onion! This was a fun, feel good poem. Now I'm hungry, thanks Rick!

  • It's the Giggle that gets me Everytime ☺️😏🤣

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Very cute!!

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    How lighthearted and full of joy! Well done, Rick :)

  • This was so adorable!

  • Very fun! I loved it

  • Reminds me if the lid saying, Do you want some fries with that shake? Lol

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