Cheeseburger Plain & Dry
A Wiggle and a Giggle
This is a Prompt Challenge from the facebook group Vocal + Assist. https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist
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I ordered a cheeseburger with the works
Add avocado with raw onion
The waitress took my order then moved to mom and did a twerk
Mom ordered cheeseburger plain and dry
The waitress asked if she wanted tater tots or fries
Mother answered fries
The waitress left our table with a jiggle and as she walked she wiggled
When our food arrived
"Ummm the food is good," mom said with a giggle…
Gobble, gobble, gobble mom ate her food up to the end
Now for chocolate cream pie she'll share it with a friend
The moral of this story is that if you eat up all your dinner
You will be the winner
And you'll finish with dessert with a wiggle and a giggle…
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About the Creator
Rick Henry Christopher
Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.
The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.
https://www.facebook.com/groups/vocalplusassist
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Comments (23)
Outstanding!!! Love it!!!
Super, well written!
Great job, congrats!!
Funny!
Funny! Congratulations on your top story.
So Fun, congratulations 🎉🎈
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Fun poem! Congratulations on Top Story!
Super fun! Congrats! 🎉🎉🎉
Way to go, Top story. Two winners from prompts love it.
Yay. congrats Rick
Congratulations on Top Story! Love the Jiggle Prompt
Wow Rick this is awesome 😎 congrats on the top story 😊
Awesome!’ Congratulations 🎉 on top story
Fun poem and congrats on your top story
Sorry, plain dry bun …..not my style. But this poem was. I liked it
Mmm! Avocado and onion! This was a fun, feel good poem. Now I'm hungry, thanks Rick!
It's the Giggle that gets me Everytime ☺️😏🤣
Very cute!!
How lighthearted and full of joy! Well done, Rick :)
This was so adorable!
Very fun! I loved it
great job
Reminds me if the lid saying, Do you want some fries with that shake? Lol
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