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a limerick

By Naomi GoldPublished 3 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
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Boy, I see your love for me grow;

I have somewhere for it to go

Sodomites knew

touch so taboo

The ring ‘round my rosy you’ll know

love poems

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Naomi Gold

Psalm 23:5

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  • Stephen Kramer Avitabile2 months ago

    Never heard a limerick like this before! So good. Natural flow and definitely got the imagery!

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  • Meg2 months ago

    Love this! Congrats on top story!

  • Roy Stevens2 months ago

    Hrmmm, I'm just here for the recipes... 😉

  • Kendall Defoe2 months ago

    As long as you have a theme... ;)

  • Morgana Miller2 months ago

    Now do one about when the world slips you a Jeffry 😋 So saucy, I love it.

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    oh my! Iknew where this was going immediately! cheeky, saucy, funny and oh so clever! Love it! Congrats on such an asstounding taboo-ty pounding Top Story!

  • Thavien Yliaster2 months ago

    Hehe, nice one Naomi. Below the rose is a small ring A tight fit for such a small thing A drive through the back road To drop off a quick load Cheeky it seems, but(t) enjoy a good fling

  • Brenton F2 months ago

    very cheeky!

  • Awesome ✨ ❤️👍😉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉Congratulations❗❗❗

  • Leslie Writes2 months ago

    Oh my! So naughty! haha

  • Em Starr2 months ago

    Hahaha, so good! I get major Jackie Q vibes from this. 😄

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    Talk about puttin' your a$$ out there! lol good one.

  • A. Lenae2 months ago

    Hahaha, I love the subtleties and the turn of phrase. This was saucy and cheeky indeed

  • JBaz2 months ago

    Clever, witty, a twist of sultry. Nicely done Congratulations

  • Dana Stewart2 months ago

    Ha, subtle raunchy, LOVE IT, lol. Congratulations on Top Story!

  • Hehehe. very funny. congrats

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Oh lol very good! Congratulations on top story!!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    hahahaha. Oh, that was great. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • Heather Hubler2 months ago

    Loved the 'cheeky' title to get things going, lol. This was clever and naughty, a great combination :) Congratulations on Top Story!!

  • Donna Fox2 months ago

    This felt sultry and was unexpected! 😳💜

  • Donna Renee3 months ago

    🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣…..and more 🤣🤣🤣. This was too funny!

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