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Boy, I see your love for me grow;
I have somewhere for it to go
Sodomites knew
touch so taboo
The ring ‘round my rosy you’ll know
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Naomi Gold
Psalm 23:5
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Comments (21)
Never heard a limerick like this before! So good. Natural flow and definitely got the imagery!
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Love this! Congrats on top story!
Hrmmm, I'm just here for the recipes... 😉
As long as you have a theme... ;)
Now do one about when the world slips you a Jeffry 😋 So saucy, I love it.
oh my! Iknew where this was going immediately! cheeky, saucy, funny and oh so clever! Love it! Congrats on such an asstounding taboo-ty pounding Top Story!
Hehe, nice one Naomi. Below the rose is a small ring A tight fit for such a small thing A drive through the back road To drop off a quick load Cheeky it seems, but(t) enjoy a good fling
very cheeky!
Awesome ✨ ❤️👍😉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉Congratulations❗❗❗
Oh my! So naughty! haha
Hahaha, so good! I get major Jackie Q vibes from this. 😄
Talk about puttin' your a$$ out there! lol good one.
Hahaha, I love the subtleties and the turn of phrase. This was saucy and cheeky indeed
Clever, witty, a twist of sultry. Nicely done Congratulations
Ha, subtle raunchy, LOVE IT, lol. Congratulations on Top Story!
Hehehe. very funny. congrats
Oh lol very good! Congratulations on top story!!
hahahaha. Oh, that was great. Congrats on the Top Story.
Loved the 'cheeky' title to get things going, lol. This was clever and naughty, a great combination :) Congratulations on Top Story!!
This felt sultry and was unexpected! 😳💜
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣…..and more 🤣🤣🤣. This was too funny!