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Wild ride

By Dana StewartPublished 5 months ago Updated 5 months ago 1 min read

They dance in the air

The sweet potato fries

Floating and bobbing

Just like fireflies

The moon is below us

My stomach feels weak

We are on the Ferris wheel

It’s adventure we seek

You smile

And give me a token

I can’t look in your eyes

We haven’t spoken

I blink twice

And my bare feet feel sand

I’m in the ocean

Where is land?

Where’d you go?

I can hear the music playing

The carnival is in full swing

What was I saying?

A bell chimes

Now I’m in a big tent

Watching you in the ring

bending a serpent

I scream and shout

You smile and dance

I can’t take it anymore

I wake up without any pants

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Dana Stewart

Soup lover proudly owned by fluffy little lap dogs. Likes: sunsets, chocolate, witty replies, and good hair days. Dislikes: Mean people and flan. Hit that subscribe button.

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  • Hannah Moore3 months ago

    She feels really swept away.

  • Donna Renee3 months ago

    hahaha you got me with the last line! I need to read this a few more times, I think 🤣

  • Quincy.V3 months ago

    Greate Blog , and good job

  • Novel Allen3 months ago

    Oh my goodness, 'Enuff'' said. Very interesting and steamy.

  • Rachel Rose4 months ago

    This is how most of my dreams feel 💚

  • Veronica Coldiron4 months ago

    Oh I LOVE this one!!

  • This made me feel like I was actually on a Ferris wheel! Amazing poem!

  • Lauren4 months ago

    This poem is a treasure.

  • Cathy holmes5 months ago

    hahaha that last line. This is very good, love it.

  • Such a cute story. Great job building such a creative illusion

  • A.N.Tipton5 months ago

    Fun :)

  • Heather Hubler5 months ago

    That last line...hahahaha! This was great! Loved the dreamy, carnival feel, and the way you worded it made it feel like pressure was rising and I was spinning, until POP the dream was over. Great work!

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