Byzantium Bayou
A fictional sensory free verse poem I wrote in 2019, but edited today!
I hear
ripples and spritzes
salute me
as I set my foot in
the placid forest
of massive, perfumed, abundant violet trees.
It’s just the beginning of my trip to the inner world!
I smell
the redolent lavender haze
as it starts
to spray
in my nose.
Wow! I just got my dose of free aromatherapy!
I feel
the invigorating touch
of violet flower breeze
being showered
onto my entire body.
I see
the dazzling lavender sky
and rays
of lilac sunlight
kissing the waves
of Adam’s ale.
This serene reservoir
is nature’s newly painted masterpiece.
It’s a portal
to ecstasy
and a destination
of everlasting mystique
and solo romance.
I’ve arrived safely at Byzantium Bayou!
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Talia Devora
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Beautiful!!! Love this💖💖💕
Strong visual imagery, really good.