Blood Pressure
A Post-Punk Song Lyric by Rick Henry
The following is a Vocal + Assist Facebook Group writing challenge.
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You're so hot
You've got my blood pressure on the spot
You're so cute
You've got it rising through the roof
Blood pressure, blood pressure I'm so anxious for you
Blood pressure, blood pressure you got me jumping for you
You're a natural beauty and a real cute cutie
You've got my subacute rising to the top
Top, top, top
Blood pressure, blood pressure it's going through the roof, roof, roof
Blood pressure, blood pressure oh baby you're so cute, cute, cute , cute
Blood pressure, blood pressure don't ever let it stop, stop, stop , stop
Blood Pressure, blood pressure I think I'm going to pop, pop, pop
Beautiful, Beautiful
Beautiful, Beautiful
This feeling is good
But the blood pressure is awful
Temperature's rising, temperature's rising, temperature's rising
Explosion!
195 over 113
call 911 cuz I'm going to scream
Scream, scream, scream
Blood pressure, blood pressure
Blood pressure!
About the Creator
Rick Henry
Writing is a distraction for me. It takes me to places unknown that fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and a soothing of the breaks and bruises of the day.
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Comments (4)
Fabulous!!! I silently sang your song!!! Blood Pressure!!!
Wonderful piece. Well done, well done, well done.
Nice! I could hear The Ramones singing this as I read.
Loved the form! It made it feel like the pressure was rising until the explosion! Awesome and so much fun!