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A haiku

By Dana StewartPublished 28 days ago β€’ 1 min read
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Blink
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Youth memory haunts

seems like only yesterday

the mirror must lie

fact or fictionsurreal poetry
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Dana Stewart

Soup lover proudly owned by fluffy little lap dogs. Likes: sunsets, chocolate, witty replies, and good hair days. Dislikes: Mean people and flan. Hit that subscribe button.

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  • Mary Haynes5 days ago

    Truth in a well written haiku!

  • Babs Iverson11 days ago

    So true!!! Lol! Loved it!!!πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’•

  • Donna Renee20 days ago

    Love this!! I remember when I was a young teenager, my mom said something like β€œI look in the mirror and I don’t FEEL that old…. I still feel like me?” πŸ™. Now that I’m past 30 I’m starting to relate to that more and more!

  • Harmony Kent21 days ago

    So relatable, lols πŸ˜‚! Love this, Dana πŸ’•πŸ™‚

  • Ah, this was so relatable! I still feel and act like a child, lol! Loved your Haiku!

  • Awesome piece πŸ₯°β€οΈπŸ’―πŸ‘

  • Mariann Carroll24 days ago

    Nice πŸ‘ 😊

  • Ou this is great

  • Loryne Andawey26 days ago

    Forget the mirror. The bathroom scale is the biggest liar! I swear it's broken 😀. Take my ❀️ and subscription and go πŸ˜‚

  • Scott Wade28 days ago

    Perfect! Yet with age comes wisdom and a classic beauty that we flit and titter away from when young. πŸ₯°

  • Very insightful. I was feeling this one for sure! Haikus are so short that sometimes it's hard to get into them but you totally mastered it!

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