I'm covered in guilt every time I read your love for me.
It's like I'm standing in-between you and him
The yellow line in the road separating you two
I'm yellow because I'm a coward
My world split in two
The world I've created in fiction became my truth
If only I knew....
And while you say your truth, he pulls at my cord
The universe reminds me of his existence
I still try to deny it
And then the pain travels from it
I feel ashamed that I try
But fear seems to still reign deep down inside me
And I deny your feelings you write me
I think they blind you to my talent
You see more than what I have
You're my only audience
And I think your raven has blinded you to your feelings
You may think you love me
Maybe I led you to where you are
and for that I'm sorry
I can be flirty without knowing
but it has cost me a friend who I need
and miss sharing with my stories
and texting just because...
I miss your laugh
You have a really sweet voice
You don't sound like an Edward though you may feel like one
Your heart's too big to carry
You deserve a world of British guys to serve you tea by the sea
You and your British guys I never understood
I miss you too
No one understands my love for writing like you do
But I miss him, can't you tell
He's like tossing a nickel in the well
You write about us under sheets... I'm shocked of the things you say about me...
You were just my friend
You held it in so well
Am I that blind?
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The imagery used effectively conveys the emotions and experiences described. Thank you for sharing this moving piece of poetry.
This poem is so powerful and it's an exploration of love, guilt, and self-discovery.
Beautifully written! The part about being an ‘Edward’ made me giggle, as if you were letting me in on a inside joke.
Very beautiful and emotional. Reminded me of someone that I used to know, yet I had to end things because I made him fall for me while I felt nothing. It's sad, and I regret a lot of my actions, but by far the biggest one is that I didn't leave early before it got too complicated for both of us.
Beautifully written. I could feel the emotion in this. Congratulations on Top Story :)
Beautiful emotive write!
Beautiful and breath-taking in its honesty. <3 Massive congratulations on a well-deserved top story!
Wow, beautiful and so relatable, ouch. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing and congrats!!
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Beautiful. Well done and congrats on the top story.